tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post2378025172565634806..comments2024-03-20T11:47:25.959+05:30Comments on सबद: सबद पुस्तिका : 6 : एडम ज़गायेवस्कीUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-87670399408529291362020-02-05T17:53:18.005+05:302020-02-05T17:53:18.005+05:30साहित्य का ऐसा मंच दुर्लभ है साहित्य का ऐसा मंच दुर्लभ है Meri aawazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13878175233644556041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-6535620710369087782017-12-07T18:21:22.741+05:302017-12-07T18:21:22.741+05:30'सबद' के मंच पर आकर रोमांच हुआ... बहुत खुश...'सबद' के मंच पर आकर रोमांच हुआ... बहुत खुश हूँ यहाँ आकर... बेहतरीन साहित्य Pankaj Trivedihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13825761046315674437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-80128092619428552622013-12-10T17:29:52.758+05:302013-12-10T17:29:52.758+05:30शुद्ध मन के गीत सी कविताये। जैसे कबीरदास ने कोरी च...शुद्ध मन के गीत सी कविताये। जैसे कबीरदास ने कोरी चदरिया फैलाई हो।Preetahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13918462881539153783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-78037679725956516162011-06-10T09:19:02.938+05:302011-06-10T09:19:02.938+05:30very very nic geet jivery very nic geet jilove vermahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07061435024569133850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-74552183238083923722011-06-05T02:33:11.122+05:302011-06-05T02:33:11.122+05:30Geet jee adbhut kaam karte hain. Shandar anuvad ki...Geet jee adbhut kaam karte hain. Shandar anuvad kiye hai.Brajesh kumarnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-71649805296265774452011-05-30T00:59:29.926+05:302011-05-30T00:59:29.926+05:30Kya baat... Bahut umda kaam kiya ye.Kya baat... Bahut umda kaam kiya ye.समर्थ वाशिष्ठ / Samartha Vashishthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16678207418787737583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-91182498211056478072011-05-29T22:49:04.800+05:302011-05-29T22:49:04.800+05:30eeshvar se kee hui prarthna ek gahre achambhe me n...eeshvar se kee hui prarthna ek gahre achambhe me nishabd chhod deti hai.ek aushasan chhane lagta hai bheetak . behad saarthak...<br /><br />prem hame swatantr karta hai samy hamari hatya.. abhootpoorv anubhav hua blog, adam ko padhkar. anurag aapka shukriya geet ji ko sabhaar naman.लीना मल्होत्राhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07272007913721801817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-49167558851746838952011-05-24T00:07:15.346+05:302011-05-24T00:07:15.346+05:30खूबसूरत लफ्ज़ .. अँधेरे-सी गाढ़ी होती शाम.
अलग संसा...खूबसूरत लफ्ज़ .. अँधेरे-सी गाढ़ी होती शाम.<br /><br />अलग संसार, नया सूरज, रुपहली रात .. सबद जादुई है.<br /><br />डाकिये को ढेर सारी बधाइयां और प्यार !दीपशिखा वर्मा / DEEPSHIKHA VERMAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12486880239305153162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-86704856339568424432011-05-22T11:37:25.212+05:302011-05-22T11:37:25.212+05:30एक से बढकर एक उम्दा रचनाएं।
उस मेहनत का दिल से शुक...एक से बढकर एक उम्दा रचनाएं।<br />उस मेहनत का दिल से शुक्रिया जिसने इनका अनुवाद किया और जिसने हमतक पहुंचाया। कहां मिल पाती है हिंदी में अनुवादित विदेशी रचनाएं।सुशील छौक्कर https://www.blogger.com/profile/15272642681409272670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-43983730872669874642011-05-20T12:30:49.573+05:302011-05-20T12:30:49.573+05:30F R Leavis ne kahi kaha hai : Peculiar completenes...F R Leavis ne kahi kaha hai : Peculiar completeness of Response. Albatta unhone ye baat critics ke liye kahi thi, lekin ye readers aur writers ke liye bhi utni hi such ho sakti hai.<br /><br />Jis din maine is pankti ki khoj ki, main bahut utsahit tha, theek usi tarah, jaise barf, chumbak aur samudra ko aavishkrut karne par mocondowaasi utsahit the.<br /><br />Main kavi chandrakant Deotale se milne pahuncha aur unhe Leavis ke is kathan ke baare mein bataya. Unhone kaha : Bahut sunder kathan hai, kintu ye Asambhav hai.<br /><br />Ve sahi the.<br /><br />Lekin aaj main sochta hu ki kabhi-kabhi kuchh Asambhavnao ki aakansha karne mein koi harz nahi hai, jaise 'manushyta ka mahaswapn'<br /><br />Geetji ne likha hai : Kavi ki rajneeti roti ki tarah hoti hai, jo ek taraf se nahi sink sakti. Lekin unse poochha ja sakta hai ki kya us roti ke dono taraf ki sinkai ko ek saath dekha ja sakta hai? Kya sikko aur pratibaddhato ke dono pahluo ko ek saath dekha ja sakta hai? Is alok mein unka ye kathan ek vastunishth (?) ya vyavharik (??) satya na sahi, lekin ek zaruri aagrah (!) ya hastakshep (!!) to hai hi.<br /><br />Sanshalesh ka swapn ek asambhavna ka swapn hai - sampoornta ki tarah, comleteness of response ki tarah- lekin aksar hamare liye swapn hamare satyo se zyada zaruri ho jaate hain, kyonki ve hamare dishasoochak hote hain - bheetri satya ke sanketak.<br /><br />Kaviyo ko dussahas karna shobha deta hai!<br /><br />Geetji ko shukriya ki unhone Adan ki itni sunder kavitao ko hamare liye aur arthpoorna bana diya!<br /><br />Sushobhit.sushobhit saktawathttp://sushobhit.s@mp.bhaskarnet.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-40049478969766044442011-05-19T21:22:14.531+05:302011-05-19T21:22:14.531+05:30yah blog ek khoobsurat patrika ka roop leta ja rah...yah blog ek khoobsurat patrika ka roop leta ja raha hai...., ek aisi patrika ka roop jiske paas kahne ke liye kuch naya aur hatkar hai.'Adam' ki kavitao se parichay karane ke liye dhanyavaad.डॉ श्रद्धा (Dr. SHRADDHA)https://www.blogger.com/profile/16407411501108024449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-1648601994771323912011-05-19T15:56:40.713+05:302011-05-19T15:56:40.713+05:30बेहतरीन पैकेज !!
निसन्देह कविताएँ बहुत अच्छी हैं....बेहतरीन पैकेज !!<br /><br />निसन्देह कविताएँ बहुत अच्छी हैं. ऐसी कविताएँ अदीठ हो चली हैं जहाँ कविता में कहानी या एक थीम परोसने की कोशिश न हो. एडम ऐसा नहीं करते. <br /><br />एडम की कविताओं की तरलता साम्प्रत उनके विचारों का बाह्य स्वरूप जान पड़ती हैं.<br /><br />गीत जी के आभारी हैं पर अनुराग 'जी' को धन्यवाद नहीं, क्योंकि धन्यवाद वगैरह एक बार या दो बार दिया जाता है, बार बार नहीं...:-)चन्दनhttp://www.nayibaat.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-35057026862455205352011-05-19T14:13:07.501+05:302011-05-19T14:13:07.501+05:30आखिरी कविता बेहद सटीक है ....बेहद !आखिरी कविता बेहद सटीक है ....बेहद !डॉ .अनुरागhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02191025429540788272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-574672224304325712011-05-19T12:44:41.274+05:302011-05-19T12:44:41.274+05:30This is beautiful work. Thanks.This is beautiful work. Thanks.अवनीश सिंह चौहान / Abnish Singh Chauhanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05755723198541317113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-10164631353752588322011-05-18T22:46:29.538+05:302011-05-18T22:46:29.538+05:30I would call it a great day Day, Geet ! The day wh...I would call it a great day Day, Geet ! The day when my belief in poetry becomes greater than my belief in mortality. It has been a day when one can tangentially touch the peace of the dead and the fear of the living people and can move to and fro with beguiling agility and determination to weave peace and fear in the knots of her braid and ask them to stay tucked there forever. Your introduction, besides making insightful comments about the paradigms of evaluating poetry and its problems, holds a mirror to your own intensity to engage with the poetry that promises excruciating joy. This joy hangs like the farthest fruit (proverbially, sweetest too) almost invisibly on the highest branch, blurred by thousand leaves around that it is almost taken to be ‘not there’ but if one persists to chew its kernel, it takes you straight to the minerals in the roots of the tree that had bore this fruit of joy. Your introduction connects Adam, his mentor and all the readers who will read it in the next millennium. The readers who will want to distinguish among small, big and large death (that waits for them inevitably because every city will become Jerusalem one day) and who will see snails talking of mortality. I tell you that professors really come out from schools with empty faces like Iliad had assigned them interminable defeat. I am one such daily commuter. It is amazing to know that the globe promised meadows and rivers to all the children at whatever place they chose for their summer vacation.<br /><br />Adam is a unique poet of displacement whose displacement is imagined and contrived in the same instant. As you have said, any reductive reading can make him a spiritual poet whereas he prays for longer winters and pride and wonders before his age ends. His is a cumulative experience that eternalizes the moment and exposes the moment to its eternal mother. Rightly said that Adam longs to touch the space and duration between two moments and that’s what motivated his philosophical and material world view. Wonderful the way Adam redefines value of precision and selection in the experience of writing poetry.<br /><br />I also see around clamoring voices announcing a divorce between wisdom and bliss. It was a great reassurance to read Adam’s essay about his mentor that initiates a beautiful talk on the value of logic and rationality and abandonment to choose afresh like a real picker. The political commitment of his mentor poet is reflected so profusely in his own poetry also. It is an awful wonder to be able to write about one’s favourite poet. It is not a tribute but an urgent letter to the one who had apparently anchored his boyish anxiety so that he could grow into a seasoned and grounded man.<br /><br />I thank Geet Chaturvedi and Anurag Vats for making the day beautiful. The day with a good poem (s) is a day doubly lived. A day that can be ‘saved’ now and ‘spent’ later on the days that gets dry in autumns.Monika Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06214280852107799571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-62254069712643582292011-05-18T15:38:36.483+05:302011-05-18T15:38:36.483+05:30Badhai meri taraf se Anurag Bhai. Ek arsha ho gaya...Badhai meri taraf se Anurag Bhai. Ek arsha ho gaya aapke blog ko padhte huye. Hamesha nai lagi.. Utni hi tazgi bhari jitni ki Ramcharit manas. Mujhe sukhad anubhuti hoti hai jab app kisi mahan rachna ke kisi khas ansh ke bare me charcha karte hain. Kai yese vishai pe jana samjha hai jiski pari kalpana nahi ki thi maine. Ye sab aapke blog ke madhyam se hi sambhab ho saka.. Aapko dhanyabad hai.Upmanyunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-35279766662415944472011-05-18T12:34:34.700+05:302011-05-18T12:34:34.700+05:30इससे पहले कि हमारा युग ख़त्म हो जाए।
हमें एक गहरा ...इससे पहले कि हमारा युग ख़त्म हो जाए।<br />हमें एक गहरा अचंभा दो .............<br /><br />सबद को अनगिनत युगों की यात्रा करनी बाकि हँ ............ Keep the flame alive ........ <br /><br />मधुMadhu Malhotrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02020873601907353406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7056011166391074188.post-48429572284175740312011-05-18T09:36:23.017+05:302011-05-18T09:36:23.017+05:30विचार श्रंखला की एक अलग विमा।विचार श्रंखला की एक अलग विमा।प्रवीण पाण्डेयhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10471375466909386690noreply@blogger.com